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Wow!

Really - this is great. You must have had quite a bit of emotion there to drive art like this. Bravo.

Good graphics, but everything else bites

Suggestions:
>Improve pacing of the action - doors creep open, but the rocket quickly stands upright?
>Sound! Sound! Sound! This animation begs for it. Don't worry about the filesize <5mg.
>Add some effect for the 2 missle flyby so we realize the 'matrix' thing is happening (that is what you were going for, right?)
>Add animation of someone hitting the 'press here' button (bet lots of viewers tried clicking it!)

Don't kill your good animation with crappy production.

I was gonna give it a 5!!!

But since I get to be eternally damned...
BLAM! Oh yeah -> :) back at you.

Biggskoo responds:

Extremely witty.

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Awesome interface, Awesome idea.

This is a neat little sound gadget that has massive potential. Your interface is intuitive while still providing complex sound mixing possibilities. The only reason I didn't give a 10 overall is because I think you could have used much better sound clips.

My suggestions:
- If posible, use sound clips that work together, like the different instruments in the same song.
- Try to synchronize each different sound clip, so whenever you add a new "+" symbol, the resulting sound is playing in time with any other tracks already playing.
- Expand the gadget with different "Sound Sets" users can choose from, each offering a unique set of sound clips. (e.g.: "Sounds of Nature", "Heavy Metal Mixer", "Smooth Jazz Clips")

Good start, but it needs much work

Suggestions:
> Alter P2 Controls to use letter keys (i.e.: R,D,F,G = forward,left,back,right)
> Create a reason to play/plot (goals for winning, penalty for loosings, level progression)
> Add sound.

This is obviously a very prelimenary work. Give it a major functionality enhancement, and you might have a winner here, cause what you've does at least show promise.

WondaBread responds:

hey u got some wicked ideas now if i jus knew how to do them but dont wry ill try to do them and then update it buut well read the other reviews ull know wht im talkin bout

Not bad

But it needs more variety. different modes of play sounds like a good start, plus more sounds like protesters screaming once in a while.

MarkOfTheBeast responds:

I plan on adding that.

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