Aviare's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bumper Cars]

Good start, but it needs much work

Suggestions:
> Alter P2 Controls to use letter keys (i.e.: R,D,F,G = forward,left,back,right)
> Create a reason to play/plot (goals for winning, penalty for loosings, level progression)
> Add sound.

This is obviously a very prelimenary work. Give it a major functionality enhancement, and you might have a winner here, cause what you've does at least show promise.

WondaBread responds:

hey u got some wicked ideas now if i jus knew how to do them but dont wry ill try to do them and then update it buut well read the other reviews ull know wht im talkin bout

[Drive And Kill Beta 1.0]

Not bad

But it needs more variety. different modes of play sounds like a good start, plus more sounds like protesters screaming once in a while.

MarkOfTheBeast responds:

I plan on adding that.

[Create a Skate]

Suggestion...

Make the boards a little bigger compared to the trucks. The nose and tail should stick out a bit more.

[Play Ball! Demo.]

Lets see the full version!

Good job on this. Sugggestion: add sound and some animations for good/bad responses. Maybe have the ball in the background bounce around a bit.

SiIence responds:

Sound'll be added, as well as more Animation. Though thank you for the suggestions and the fair vote. :]

[EMUNes Death Theater]

Interesting concept

This is pretty unique. Nice interaction. Typical sprite usage, but fun anyway. I'll give you a 3 out of 5.